It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many

developmentsoccurs

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developments occurs

development occurs

in all over the world so many

cities

and towns have all facilities

such

as

parks

,

gardens

and many more and it places more beneficial for individuals

also

so

than

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then

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I completely agree with

this

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these

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develpoments

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development

developments

. Many small

cities

and towns did not have

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much modern

muchmodern

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much modern

technology and equipment so they all migrated from to another big city or town

therefore

if stats have

parks

and

gardens

so people go for some refreshment

also

.

Moreover

, it will be beneficial to children's growth

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because

becuase

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because

in

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apply

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this

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these

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days

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day's

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many parents lived in

cities

or towns which have many

fascinate

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places for visiting and

rejuinaite

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rejuvenate

.

For example

, my city

have

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has

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so many

gardens

and rivers

do

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that do

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public often go there for time

spending

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to spend

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after exam and job .

In addition

, it is quite necessary for all age groups people

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because

becuase

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because

in the morning they go to some park for

exercising

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exercise

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and older people often go to

parks

or

gardens

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because

becuase

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because

they have

lot

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a lot

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of time and they spent with their dear

once

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ones

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.

Similarly

. if

cities

have so many

gardens

so they

also

have trees and plants so that air pollution can be decreased . Apart from

this

many parents like to go for walk with their children after job or meal so they can

also

spend more time with family members and friends.

Furthermore

, many doctors

also

said that having

parks

and

gardens

near

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nearby

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by

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apply

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your home is very important for good health and air. In conclusion, many outdoor places like

this

having

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have

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number of benefits for

humans

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development not only for physical

grwoth

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growth

but

also

mental stuff. So that all

cities

and

town

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towns

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will build

gardens

and outdoor

parks

more in future.