It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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and towns have all facilities

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and many more and it places more beneficial for individuals

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and towns did not have

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so people go for some refreshment

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, it will be beneficial to children's growth

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many parents lived in

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or towns which have many

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places for visiting and

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, my city

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so many

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and rivers

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public often go there for time

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after exam and job .

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, it is quite necessary for all age groups people

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in the morning they go to some park for

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and older people often go to

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of time and they spent with their dear

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have so many

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have trees and plants so that air pollution can be decreased . Apart from

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many parents like to go for walk with their children after job or meal so they can

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spend more time with family members and friends.

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said that having

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your home is very important for good health and air. In conclusion, many outdoor places like

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number of benefits for

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development not only for physical

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growth

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mental stuff. So that all

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and

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will build

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and outdoor

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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288 words

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It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

Many poducts that we buy are made in other countries. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people say that school children should be given individual class work, while others think that working in small groups is better for them. Discuss both approaches and include your own

Some people think that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others believe that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.