Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.

Nowadays, a large number of

individuals

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continuously take

alternative

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pills without

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suggestions and they treat their health problems and any

diseases

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by themselves. In my opinion, I think that it is a negative development because many

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lost their life due to taking

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medicines

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and they

face

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many dangerous

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which are harmful to them , I will explain my reason for it in the upcoming paragraphs.

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with, there are many drawbacks to taking

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pills without doctor suggestions and take by themselves.

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and foremost,

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have many chances of losing their life due to trying

alternative

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medicines

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and treatments

instead

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of getting suggestions from doctors.

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, in a recent survey, it can be seen that millions of

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died due to taking sleeping pills without limit, and

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, they lost their life.

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,

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also

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face

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many

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from buying

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directly from the shops ,

individuals

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do not know the way of taking those

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and they

face

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difficult

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are harmful to them.

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, sometimes

people

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treat themselves whenever they feel bad and avoid to going

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clinic and, they buy

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and use natural treatments for their

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,

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of treating

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face

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infection problems in their body.

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, some

individuals

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use dirty clothes to cover the harmful places of their body and for ,

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they will get infected due to using dirty clothes, but visiting a clinic they will get the right treatment

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with proper way which impacts positively on their health. In conclusion, after considering all,

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think that taking

medicines

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by themselves has many drawbacks and

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face

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a number of health problems.

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, I suggest that

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should check up on themselves at hospitals and clinics which will be helpful for them to prevent

diseases

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.