Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.
Nowadays, a large number of
individuals
continuously take alternative
pills without doctor's
suggestions and they treat their health problems and any Fix the agreement mistake
doctors'
diseases
by themselves. In my opinion, I think that it is a negative development because many individuals
lost their life due to taking alternative
medicines
and they face
many dangerous diseases
which are harmful to them , I will explain my reason for it in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with, there are many drawbacks to taking alternative
pills without doctor suggestions and take by themselves. First
and foremost, people
have many chances of losing their life due to trying alternative
medicines
and treatments instead
of getting suggestions from doctors. For example
, in a recent survey, it can be seen that millions of people
died due to taking sleeping pills without limit, and as a result
, they lost their life. Secondly
, people
also
face
many diseases
from buying medicines
directly from the shops , individuals
do not know the way of taking those medicines
and they face
difficult diseases
that which
are harmful to them.
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Furthermore
, sometimes people
treat themselves whenever they feel bad and avoid to going the
clinic and, they buy Change preposition
to the
medicines
and use natural treatments for their diseases
, such
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ways
people
face
infection problems in their body. For example
, some individuals
use dirty clothes to cover the harmful places of their body and for ,that
they will get infected due to using dirty clothes, but visiting a clinic they will get the right treatment Correct word choice
and
along
with proper way which impacts positively on their health.
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think that taking Change the capitalization
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medicines
by themselves has many drawbacks and individuals
face
a number of health problems. However
, I suggest that people
should check up on themselves at hospitals and clinics which will be helpful for them to prevent diseases
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