Many young children have unsupervised access to the internet and are using the internet to socialize with others. This can lead to a number of dangerous situations which can be threatening for children.

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of

youngsters

have unsupported permission to

use

the

internet

, thereby utilizing

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to associate with others.

this

has led to some grievous situations which can be

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alarming to

children

.

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essay will buttress some of these problems and profess some meaningful

conclusion

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conclusions

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will be drawn. One of the

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this

is uncontrolled

use

and early exposure to

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a device

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device

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devices

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such

as

phones

, computers,

laptops

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and laptops

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.

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will lead to low concentration in academic activities thereby resulting in low grades.

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,

youngsters

who were involved in a study which was carried out in a model school here in Nigeria

,

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were shared into two groups, those using

internet

devices

and the ones who do not

have

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,

children

without

phones

perform better academically because their attention was not divided during studies.

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,

cyber crime

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cybercrime

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is an ugly condition perpetrated by

children

with

free

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a free

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opportunity to the

internet

. They

use

this

medium to advertise unverified jobs and when they are able to get a victim, they will ask for money before the work will be offered to them, as soon as the target pays, the amount agreed upon, that contact will be blocked permanently while they continue with their business. Parents should install

parental

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a parental

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guidance application used to monitor

children

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activities on

internet

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the internet

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on all the

devices

used by kids.

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will enable them to have control over all that the

children

are doing.

Majority

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The majority

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of

youngsters

have unsupported permission to

use

the

internet

, thereby utilizing

this

to associate with others.

this

has led to some grievous situations which can be

a

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apply

show examples

alarming to

children

.

This

essay will buttress some of these problems and profess some meaningful

conclusion

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conclusions

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will be drawn. One of the

issue

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issues

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to

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with

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this

is uncontrolled

use

and early exposure to

devices

such

as

phones

, computers,

laptops

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and laptops

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.

This

will lead to low concentration in academic activities thereby resulting in low grades.

For example

,

youngsters

who were involved in a study which was carried out in a model school here in Nigeria were split into two groups, those using

internet

devices

and the ones who do not

have

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apply

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,

children

without

phones

perform better academically because their attention was not divided during studies.

Secondly

,

cyber crime

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cybercrime

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is an ugly condition perpetrated by

children

with

free

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a free

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opportunity to the

internet

. They

use

this

medium to advertise unverified jobs and when they are able to get a victim, they will ask for money before the work will be offered to them, as soon as the target pays, the amount agreed upon, that contact will be blocked permanently while they continue with their business. In conclusion, though unrestricted

avenue

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avenues

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to the

internet

have

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detrimental

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a detrimental

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effect

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effects

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on the lives of

children

, parental control and supervision will help to curb

this

menace.