Many young children have unsupervised access to the internet and are using the internet to socialize with others. This can lead to a number of dangerous situations which can be threatening for children.

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has led to some grievous situations which can be
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is uncontrolled
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will lead to low concentration in academic activities thereby resulting in low grades.
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who were involved in a study which was carried out in a model school here in Nigeria
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were shared into two groups, those using
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devices
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and the ones who do not
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,
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without
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perform better academically because their attention was not divided during studies.
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is an ugly condition perpetrated by
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opportunity to the
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medium to advertise unverified jobs and when they are able to get a victim, they will ask for money before the work will be offered to them, as soon as the target pays, the amount agreed upon, that contact will be blocked permanently while they continue with their business. Parents should install
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guidance application used to monitor
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children
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activities on
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internet
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the internet
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on all the
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used by kids.
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will enable them to have control over all that the
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are doing.
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The majority
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of
youngsters
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have unsupported permission to
use
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the
internet
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, thereby utilizing
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to associate with others.
this
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has led to some grievous situations which can be
a
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apply
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alarming to
children
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.
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essay will buttress some of these problems and profess some meaningful
conclusion
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conclusions
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will be drawn. One of the
issue
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issues
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to
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with
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this
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is uncontrolled
use
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and early exposure to
devices
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such
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as
phones
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, computers,
laptops
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and laptops
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.
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will lead to low concentration in academic activities thereby resulting in low grades.
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,
youngsters
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who were involved in a study which was carried out in a model school here in Nigeria were split into two groups, those using
internet
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devices
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and the ones who do not
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,
children
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without
phones
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perform better academically because their attention was not divided during studies.
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cyber crime
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cybercrime
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is an ugly condition perpetrated by
children
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with
free
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a free
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opportunity to the
internet
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. They
use
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this
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medium to advertise unverified jobs and when they are able to get a victim, they will ask for money before the work will be offered to them, as soon as the target pays, the amount agreed upon, that contact will be blocked permanently while they continue with their business. In conclusion, though unrestricted
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to the
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detrimental
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a detrimental
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effect
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effects
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on the lives of
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, parental control and supervision will help to curb
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menace.

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