Today's society is based on laws and rules. It can't function well if individuals are free to do whatever they want. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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People's adherence to the
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and laws we have, sometimes with strict enforcement, is a critical cornerstone
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our
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. As far as I am concerned, I am wholeheartedly on
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camp and I will explain it in the following paragraphs. On one hand, the
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and laws are to govern the boundaries of the power of governments. Clearly defined power boundaries bring certainty and clarity, which is essential to attract investments.
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, if a country's government can pass a law and apply it retrospectively to fine the actions a company did in the past, or some rich and powerful officials can walk away from taking bribes, by no means any companies will feel comfortable investing in that country in future. Without continuous investment, the efficiency level would soon become laggard and fall behind the back of the treadmill, and the employment level of the
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would be negatively impacted as well. The living standards of people there will fall eventually.
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,
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are
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set to limit citizens not to engage in criminal activities
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as theft and robbery.
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, if the normal public in our
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needed to bring weapons to defend themselves all the
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, they would have spent considerable
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and
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resources in training themselves using these weapons and
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would have less
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remaining to engage in productive activities like studying in leisure
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. If
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the case, it seems an inevitability that both the productivity of the
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and
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of security of the people will plummet to a staggering level. In conclusion, in order to let a
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thrive, it is paramount to make both the government and
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public adhere to
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and laws. I am very confident that, every dollar spent on maintaining
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system is worth the money.
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