IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 8

A friend of yours is going on holiday and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter recommend a good place that you have visited before for a holiday say where you went and where you stayed say what you can do there and what the food was like

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Hi John, Hope you are doing well. I received your letter
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 week but I was too busy with my work assignments. You had asked me to suggest a place for vacation, I think Alberta will be the best place for you to explore, as you are a mountains and beach lover.
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 year, me and my parents went there in the summer. As it is solely designed to attract more tourists, you can find unlimited accommodation options at reasonable prices. I stayed at a local boutique hotel named Banff Lodge.They provided in-room facilities with comfortable rooms. Trust me, It is a heaven on earth. You can explore so many viewpoints. It is full of natural beauty with lakes, mountains, beaches, hiking and camping sites, You'll love that.
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 in Banff, you can go for gondola ride it will take you up to the top of the hill and you can have you most cinematic experience of your life with the world's best dining And, you will enjoy the local food made of local cheese and bread with their special regional wine. I am sure you will enjoy
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 place if you go there. Lot of love, Maahi

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coherence and cohesion
Try to provide a clearer introduction and structure to your letter. For example, start by briefly stating that you're happy to recommend a holiday destination before diving into the details.
coherence and cohesion
Although the letter generally connects well, make sure each idea stays focused within its own cohesive unit. Splitting some ideas into separate paragraphs may enhance clarity.
task achievement
Consider elaborating more on the activities available in Alberta or personal experiences to fulfill the task achievement more thoroughly.
suitable writing tone
The letter has a friendly tone and addresses the recipient appropriately, which is suitable for a letter to a friend.
complete response
You provided specific details about where you stayed and what activities you can enjoy, which enriches the recommendation.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • picturesque
  • breathtaking
  • culturally rich
  • accommodations
  • amenities
  • local cuisine
  • adventure sports
  • historical sites
  • memorable experience
  • quaint
  • authentic
  • scenic views
  • hospitality
  • serenity
  • bustling markets
  • authentic dining experience
  • pristine
  • local delicacies
  • vibrant
  • tranquil
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