The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other private vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,

global-warming

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global warming

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and environmental problems are big consarn and day by day it is increasing

and

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apply

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as a result

, many

part

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parts

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of

world's

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the world's

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temperature is rising, rain is getting less and air and water are getting polluted. Some

people

believes

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believe

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that

by

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apply

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increasing the cost of

fuel

for cars and other private vehicles will help to fight

with

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apply

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this

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these

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environmental issues. I

am disagree

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disagree

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with

this

statement.

To begin

with, increasing

fuel

cost

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costs

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will not solve the environmental problems, but it will create unbalance in society.

People

who have enough money

they

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can still afford the costly

fuel

and roam anywhere they want. On other hand,

people

with low income will be deeply

effected

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affected

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because

this

increases their overhead in monthly expenses.

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, rich

people

already

buying

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buy

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the

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apply

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costly cars which are

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high

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heigh

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high

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fuel

consumption, so they already afford

car

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cars

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and

fuel

. On

opposite

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the opposite

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site

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side

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, average

people

chose

fuel

economic

car

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cars

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to save

fuel

and

it's

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its

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cost.

Furthermore

, environmental problems

not

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are not

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just

cause

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caused

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by

the

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apply

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fuel

but

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there are many other elements

also

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that also

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play

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playing

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a part in

this

. like

chemical

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the chemical

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industry, their by-products pollute the water and

many

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much

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other

industry

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industries

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burn coal which

also

effect

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effects

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to

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the environment.

Instead

of

increase

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increasing

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the

fuel

price, government and other

organization

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organizations

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should spread awareness of all

this issue

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these issues

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and plant more trees

and

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apply

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save

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saving

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woods

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wood

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will be more effective. To conclude, If

increase

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the increase

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in

fuel

price will create unbalance in society which only

effect

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effects

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to

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apply

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average

people

and rich

people

still afford it. Though

,

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apply

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environmental issues

not

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are not

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just

cause

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caused

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by

fuel

and

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there are many other factors responsible as well and awareness should be spread about it.