The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other private vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays,
global-warming
and environmental problems are big consarn and day by day it is increasing Correct your spelling
global warming
and
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apply
as a result
, many Linking Words
part
of Change to a plural noun
parts
world's
temperature is rising, rain is getting less and air and water are getting polluted. Some Correct article usage
the world's
people
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believes
that Change the verb form
believe
by
increasing the cost of Change preposition
apply
fuel
for cars and other private vehicles will help to fight Use synonyms
with
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apply
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this
environmental issues. I Correct determiner usage
these
am disagree
with Change the verb form
disagree
this
statement.
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To begin
with, increasing Linking Words
fuel
Use synonyms
cost
will not solve the environmental problems, but it will create unbalance in society. Fix the agreement mistake
costs
People
who have enough money Use synonyms
they
can still afford the costly Correct pronoun usage
apply
fuel
and roam anywhere they want. On other hand, Use synonyms
people
with low income will be deeply Use synonyms
effected
because Correct your spelling
affected
this
increases their overhead in monthly expenses. Linking Words
For example
, rich Linking Words
people
already Use synonyms
buying
Wrong verb form
buy
the
costly cars which are Correct article usage
apply
Correct your spelling
high
heigh
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high
fuel
consumption, so they already afford Use synonyms
car
and Fix the agreement mistake
cars
fuel
. On Use synonyms
opposite
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the opposite
site
, average Correct your spelling
side
people
chose Use synonyms
fuel
economic Use synonyms
car
to save Fix the agreement mistake
cars
fuel
and Use synonyms
it's
cost.
Correct your spelling
its
Furthermore
, environmental problems Linking Words
not
just Add a missing verb
are not
cause
by Wrong verb form
caused
the
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apply
fuel
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but
there are many other elements Correct word choice
apply
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also
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that also
play
a part in Wrong verb form
playing
this
. like Linking Words
chemical
industry, their by-products pollute the water and Correct article usage
the chemical
many
other Replace the quantifier
much
industry
burn coal which Change to a plural noun
industries
also
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effect
Change the verb form
effects
to
the environment. Change preposition
apply
Instead
of Linking Words
increase
the Wrong verb form
increasing
fuel
price, government and other Use synonyms
organization
should spread awareness of all Fix the agreement mistake
organizations
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this issue
and plant more trees Fix the agreement mistake
these issues
and
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apply
save
Wrong verb form
saving
woods
will be more effective.
To conclude, If Fix the agreement mistake
wood
increase
in Add an article
the increase
an increase
fuel
price will create unbalance in society which only Use synonyms
effect
Change the verb form
effects
to
average Change preposition
apply
people
and rich Use synonyms
people
still afford it. ThoughUse synonyms
,
environmental issues Remove the comma
apply
not
just Add a missing verb
are not
cause
by Wrong verb form
caused
fuel
Use synonyms
and
there are many other factors responsible as well and awareness should be spread about it.Correct word choice
apply
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