Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university in order to travel or to work do you think advantags outweigh vote disadvantages

In the present world, where having a degree has become a sign of
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achievement
achivement
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, we see
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a lot
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between their school & university
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priorities. As
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feel
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disadvantages
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disadvantages
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analyzed
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most
mostly
students
take
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finance
& some
students
take it too get a break from
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life. As mostly everyone
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when they take a break so they can get
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experience & it makes a person's CV strong. But
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feel as they
work
in their
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years they are undervalued in their salaries & most of them get stuck in that
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environment. As a study shows out of 10 only 8
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continues their
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other's stay at
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taking breaks
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individual gets a break from
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and
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usually travel
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some extent and enjoy
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social life. They get more socially active and they tend to spend more time with people they love. As seen some take breaks to collect the funds required for the university
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tuition
fees or
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at least
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1/3 amount of their student loans so they get a relive in future. I personally don't think there is
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taking breaks as most
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prefer
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prefer
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finiancal
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financial
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as
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gaps
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years extend the time they start their
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professional
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career life as without a university degree a
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professional career cannot start. As we summarize
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but
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it all depends on the
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situations
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  • Gap year
  • Life experiences
  • Personal growth
  • Independence
  • Resume enhancement
  • Practical skills
  • Cultural awareness
  • Global perspective
  • Academic burnout
  • Renewed energy
  • Financial savings
  • Student loans
  • Skillset
  • Workforce
  • Self-discovery
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