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Too much attention is given to headline-grabbing disasters like earthquakes and floods. Government should concentrate their resources on educating people about the risk they face nearer to home, which can cost far more lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

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Nowadays,
news
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 headline-grabbing
disasters
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 more and more make
people
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 feel unsafe
instead
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 of bringing the actual headline that educated the
people
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. Headline
news
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such
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 as earthquakes and floods bring the scared among the residents,
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, there is no education from the
government
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 to bring understanding to the middle of civilians. I totally agree that educating
people
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 to understand the risk they
face
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 nearer to home must do,
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, it will help to reduce fatality during
disasters
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.
Firstly
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, the
news
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 companies always bring fascinating headlines during
disasters
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 on purpose to make it more interesting. In some cases, the
news
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 isn't credible at all,
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 as the picture from another case of disaster. It will take more attention from the readers,
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, the point of view will be different from those who
face
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 the
disasters
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 directly.
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, for citizens under mount Merapi when the mount erupted in 2012, the
news
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 brings the eruption is very dangerous and there is no safe place
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 so moved to downtown Yogyakarta. Some of the
people
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 were evacuated to the city , while another choose to stay because feel hopeless.
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, there is no education on the way to evacuate the civilians. In
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 case, the
government
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 must take charge to give the citizens an understanding of the danger.
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, to know the sign of
disasters
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 and
also
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 the effect after them.
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 education must be understood by the
people
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, and they will know the path to the evacuation. There is a lot of induction in Indonesia, called as Ring of Fire, by mean, Indonesia will always
face
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 natural
disasters
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 till the end. In
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 condition, the citizens must force the
government
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 to educate them and save more lives. In conclusion, the
news
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 companies will always make interesting headline-grabbing
disasters
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, in a way to increase the reader.
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, Indonesian civilians must be educated by the
government
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 and understand how to
face
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disasters
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instead
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 to believe in the
news
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 directly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • headline-grabbing
  • disasters
  • natural disasters
  • media coverage
  • sensationalism
  • local issues
  • funding
  • executive resources
  • resource allocation
  • risk awareness
  • domestic fires
  • road safety
  • food storage
  • education initiatives
  • community engagement
  • local government
  • immediate disaster relief
  • long-term benefits
  • local risk mitigation
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