The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalization produce positive effects to everyone. Do you agree or disagree?

Obviously, there are no arguments that multinational

companies

and global trade benefit our

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in many ways,

such

as more employment opportunities, products with higher quality and lower price, as well as

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multicultural

multi culture

. In my opinion,

however

, it is hard to say that international corporations and globalization benefit everyone in the world.

First

of all,

although

the

companies

from developed create more jobs in developing

countries

, due to the lack of effective management and the rules of the governments, the owners of foreign

companies

often exploit the employees in developing

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,

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them to work overtime and pay them

less

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salaries.

Furthermore

, the working conditions tend to be poor, it is extremely easy to cause health problems, and workers there can rarely get the same

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as the workers in western societies.

As a result

, they will suffer if they get ill.

Moreover

, owing to the strict codes of home

countries

, many factories, which can cause environmental problems, move to

developing

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countries

. These factories produce

a great deal of

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a lot of

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waste gases and water

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and discharge them into

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the nature

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nature

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environment without any limitation. Seriously damage the local ecosystem

Finally

, in order to extend their market and dump their goods,

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internationally famous

companies

often consider

the

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developing

countries

as their targets. In the circumstances, Local products and

companies

tend to be less competitive.

Consequently

, native brands will be replaced by exotic ones in a short time, and

then

die out eventually.

This

trend sometimes would damage the economy of

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developing

countries

. In conclusion, I recognize that the trend of globalization generally influences the whole world in a positive way,

however

, from my perspective, it absolutely can not benefit each person or each body in the world.