Sompe people say now is the best time in history to be living. what is your opinion about this? what other time in history would be interesting to live in?

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It is crystal clear that our lives have changed beyond recognition. Every year new technologies are invented. Some people think now is the best time during human

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period to live in while

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others argue that, there are other periods that might be interesting to live in. I wholeheartedly opine that these days are the best days. In

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I will discuss, both views. To embark, to advance a convincing theory I could deal with the advent of new technologies. It is obvious that

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they have made our lives much easier and faster.

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telephone

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has made communication faster.

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, you can get in touch with other people in foreign countries.

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to what I have just said, you can

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have it as your wallet, tv, camera and etcetera.

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, transportation is quicker. The fastest way to travel is by air. It was written in a magazine that, the longest air travel in the world is about 23 hours from Australia to America, while in the past it took about 6 months to go

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from Iran which

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are very close to each other. In the forthcoming; paragraph I could deal whit other centuries. I’m not even interested in living on the previous decade. On the grounds that there wasn’t any tech in the past. Another feature which I could mention is about

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. I’m sure most people would probably agree that there will be great changes related to

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and foremost, there will be many robots and I really can’t stand them. Especially, the ones that are like

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a human

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. Because they are more powerful than individuals, yet they only don’t have sense. To conclude, in the past everything was ruff and in the

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everything will change a lot and I prefer to live

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Sompe people say now is the best time in history to be living. what is your opinion about this? what other time in history would be interesting to live in?

Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea.Some people think they should be banned.Do you agree or disagree. Give examples for your answers.

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sprots to younger children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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