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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Although
 technological development has enabled us to enjoy watching a
movie
 on our mobile phones or tablets, some
people
 still say that watching it in a
movie
 theatre is more enjoyable. While I believe that the immersive
experience
 and superior video quality which these devices offer have
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better involvement than cinema, I would
also
 discuss the benefits of the large screen that cinema offers. Since
movie
 theatres are solely designed to make the public enjoy a show, they consider all the aspects like audio quality, screen size, and comfortable seating.
Further
 to say that now
movie
 houses are
also
 equipped with the latest technology like 3D movies and better resolutions. Despite all
this
, cinemas still have lots of pleasure-reducing disturbances like the chattering of
people
, ringing mobiles and a lot more. All in all, it cannot provide the immersive solo
experience
 that these palm gadgets can offer.
On the contrary
, mobile phones give solo
experience
 in whichever environment one wants to watch a
movie
.
Also
, they come in the most advanced screens equipped with the latest features like 4K video resolution and higher frames per
second
.
Furthermore
, one is never disturbed by other
people
 because the sound and display are never distorted by other
people
's activities. Considering all that, we can say that mobile devices give a more pleasurable
experience
 of watching a
movie
 than cinemas. In conclusion,
although
 cinemas once used to give the most enjoyable
experience
 of watching a film, modern palm gadgets like mobile phones and tablets give a better
experience
 now. The technological advantages which these devices can offer enhance the film
experience
 in a far better way than the large screen of a cinema.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Mobile Viewing
  • Cost-efficient
  • Time-efficient
  • Personalized experience
  • Immersive
  • Cinematic experience
  • Surround sound
  • Collective experience
  • Technical superiority
  • Sensory experience
  • Social hubs
  • Cultural events
  • Distractions
  • Preservation
  • Filmmaking art
  • Cinematographic nuances
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