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Band 7.5

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You saw an online post of an important English academy looking for teachers to help underprivileged foreigner students. Write a letter of application to the company. In your letter: • Introduce yourself • Explain why you are suitable for the job. • Provide details of your past work experience. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for the vacancy you posted on your website page.
To begin
 with, I have completed my graduation from Oxford University and my major is language pedagogy.
Besides
 that, I have been actively attending linguistic training and have received several special international certificates. In my opinion, I am a suitable candidate for working as a tutor in your reputable English academy as there are several reasons.
Firstly
, I am knowledgeable since I have been consistently learning the English language for nine years.
Secondly
, I am very sociable and can get on well with students easily.
Moreover
, I can conduct lessons perfectly because of my interesting methods and sense of humour.
Finally
, I am willing to help underprivileged students achieve their goals and feel academic fulfilment. I should mention that I possess a whale of experience because I started to pursue my academic career as soon as I graduated from my university and I have worked for three international schools for six years. I hope you will take my educational background, relevant skills and sufficient experience into consideration. I look forward to hearing a prompt reply from you soon. Thank you for spending your valuable time reading my application letter. Yours faithfully, Liza
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea, which can enhance the logical flow.
task achievement
Include more specific examples of your teaching methods or achievements with students to strengthen the task response.
coherence cohesion
The letter displays a clear structure, separating introduction, your suitability, and past work experience effectively.
task achievement
You have employed formal language throughout the letter, suitable for the context of a job application.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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