Although there is a lot of software available today that can translate from one language to another, it is still necessary for people to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Introduction

Learning a foreign

language

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in my opinion

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apply

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is very necessary

nowdays

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nowadays

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.It is

apart

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a part

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the knowledges

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knowledges

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knowledge

pieces of knowledge

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and

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cultural

culturals

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culture

of everyone.Both of them are good ways to understand

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people but for

myself

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I would choose better

learning

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a foreign

language

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than using translating transmit

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software.I feel

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this

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way for two

reason

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which I will explain in the following paragraphs.

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Firstly

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,by learning a foreign

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you will have more

confident

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confidence

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in yourself when you speak with other that are from the same nation and don'

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know your native

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last

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summer I had a tour

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Paris.

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desire was to visit all the historical places because I am in passion

with

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about

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history but I don'

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understand well when they explained and I became too much angry with myself.After I back

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apply

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home

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I started a course about

French

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the French

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language

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On the other hand

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course

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if you are too busy with other things you don'

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have free time to learn every

languages

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for each place you visit.One time when I went Japony to hold a conference

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construction of

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I don'

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know their

language

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but I used google translate from Japan to Albanian and in

this

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way I haven'

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difficulty

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with understanding.

Conclusion

In conclusion,I strongly believed that learning a foreign

language

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is better for all of us because you will become more confident

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yourself and others.

ilirjana.sheta

Jul 28, 2022

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

230 words

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