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Some people believe that schoolchildren should be made to wear a uniform. Others feel that children should be free to choose their own clothes. Discuss both sides of the argument and say whether you agree with pupils wearing uniforms. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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There is no doubt that there is a debate about uniforms at schools. Some people see that wearing the same uniforms at
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 is a very fair action to prevent any
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 of distinguishing among
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, while others believe
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 a personal issue and the
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 have their right to wear whatever they want at
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. In
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 to wear the same
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 for all
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 at
school
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. Social and economic situations play a major role in creating
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 among
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 at the schools, where the
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 and the quality of the
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 is a
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 that can create
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, giving
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 a chance to wear whatever they want to dress, will do harm to poor
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 whose parents cannot affordable
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, it is a good approach to let all
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 were the same
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 which can distinguish the
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 of
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 A from
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. Indeed, it will increase the belonging to the
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 when all pupils wear the same
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.
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, other people think
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 the most effective
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 to learn
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 about freedom at
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 by allowing them to select
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 that they will dress at
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.
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, some
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 management imposes the
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 to wear the same
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 without considering gender sensitivity.
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, not all schools provide
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clothes
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 that suit
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 or they consider when designing the
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 the desires of the new generation which affect
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 psychologically if they wear old fashion
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. To sum up, wearing one
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 at
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 is the best
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 to prevent any
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 of social and economic sensitivity, but the
uniform
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 should consider the desires of the new generation and make it up to date with fashion.
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