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Living in a country where you have to spake a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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People
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 have to speak to connect with the beautiful world. Some
people
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lives
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 in other country and have to
communicates
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in
overseas
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an overseas
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language
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 can create important social miscommunications and personal issues. I think that
although
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 speaking in
foreign
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a foreign
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 tongue can cause some
problems
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, it is
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 effective for
people
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 in
another ways
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. 
To begin
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 with,
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peoples
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people
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whom
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who
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 lived in another land and talk
with
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in
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non-native
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a non-native
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language
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 find social
problems
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such
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cope
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 with their culture and
communicate
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communicating
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to
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people
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.
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, they
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 find practical
problems
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 like hard
to
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earning
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.
Peoples
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 find
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it difficulty
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difficulty
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 to connect with their local
people
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 by talking
with
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in
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 different
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language
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languages
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 resulting in coping
up
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with their culture and environment
is become
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 harder for them.
This
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 may help to obstruct
with
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their social activities.
Moreover
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,
people
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also
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 find
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it difficulty
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difficulty
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 to maintain their subsistence. Because speaking in
foreign
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language
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also
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create
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creates
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problems
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 to do work
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 earning money is becoming
tenecious
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tenacious
 for them possible leading to take poverty in their
life
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 which make their lives harder.
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, when
bengli
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Bengali
people
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 go
in
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a
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an
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Americans
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 restaurant, they find
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difficult
difficulty
diffulty
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it diffulty
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 to order
foods
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food
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 cause the weiter is talking in
english
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. Those
peoples
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also
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 face
same
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 situations when they work here and have to serve their local community.
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, growing
in
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a nations
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a nation
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 where have to talk in
overseas
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an overseas
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 tongue can
makes
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people
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 lifestyle dangerous.
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, even though it is harder to speak, it
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 has some positivity including grasping
skill
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skills
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.
Peoples
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who
whom
whome
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who
 lived in
different
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 county have a chance to know lots of unique proficiency provided them
lots
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with lots
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 of new
experience
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experiences
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 which will help them in
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further
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stage
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stages
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 of
life
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.
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, if a person bought up in
bought up in
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apply
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USA
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the USA
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 and
then
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 back to Bangladesh,
bangladeshi
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Bangladeshi
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 companies
ready
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 to provide high salaries for them. Indeed, living in another country can
makes
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people
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life
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 beautiful.  In conclusion, growing up in a non-native speaking land
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makes
makess
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makes
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people
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people's
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 social
life
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 and practical
life
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 harder. But, I
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 think that it has
also
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 some advantages.
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