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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, all countries
work
 to improve their
sectors
such
 as economics, education and manufacturing but many governments reckon that economics is considered the most important sector that they should
work
 on it while others think that there are many
sectors
 of the
country
 that it should be focused as well as economic so in
this
 , the essay I will discuss both
sides
 and I will give my opinion.
First
 of all, there are many
sectors
 in the
country
 that authorities should improve and
work
 it to achieve some
progress
such
 as education,
moreover
 the learning
system
 is considered one of the most crucial things that contribute significantly to the development of the
country
.
For instance
, in Germany, there is focusing on their educational
system
this
 may lead
this
country
 one of the most modern countries that have an advanced
system
 in learning but in Germany, they improve other
sides
such
 as working and military at the same rate so
this
country
 is considered modern in all
sides
 so I believe
that is
 so important and make all things
progress
 with the same time.
On the other hand
, many people who have responsibility like to focus just on the economic side on top of that they
work
 to make economic
progress
 more than anything.
For example
, In ,Taiwan there are many positive things about its profit and income from the trade but when it is looked on another side like its educational
system
, it is so bad and the number of people who can not write or read is so high because there is lacking on developing of learning and all expenditure of
country
 goes to the economical projects
however
 I think
this
 thing may cause a serious problem a long time. Overall, political people tend strongly to enhance the economy of their
country
 while others believe there are many
sides
 that need to improve it like education so in my view I think all
sectors
 of the
country
 are important and they can not achieve outstanding
progress
 if they focus on something more than others.
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