You booked a tour package for your family through a travel agent. You had enjoyed the tour very much. Write a letter to the travel agent to thank them. In your letter: Mention the tour you took Describe the things about the tour you & your family liked the best Also, suggest any improvements to make things better.
Dear Sagar,
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22 . It was really planned well without any issues on the tour as we travelled from India to New Zealand which was a great memory for me and my family. Use synonyms
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there were some minor troubles we faced with your booking of hotels which I like to address .
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, Queenstown was so beautiful with lakes and mountains with breathtaking views. My brother had the longest bungee jump from Linking Words
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that my children enjoyed visiting special farmhouses and had a great chance to learn a few points from them. Change preposition
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, while we travelling to Queenstown we had a 1 day visit time in Singapore and we took a jet boat on the river which was amazing all my family members just loved it. Linking Words
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, the food was fantastic with great culture and traditions.
As there were few issues on our stay the hotel rooms which were booked by you were disappointing as there were no basic amenities, staff response was very rude and they even did not provide us Hot water which was disgusting as the hotels were not in form to welcome guests. So I like you to change bookings for other customers.
Hoping positive response from you,
Yours faithfully,
Karan MummaneniLinking Words
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