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n some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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There is a contentious argument about why folks have become keener to know about the evolution of the house or building in which they are residing. In
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 can opt for.
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 with, the public has started developing an interest to know more about their homes in order to avoid getting stuck in illegal
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 blunders and for personal safety reasons.
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 builders these days are misguiding their customers through activities
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 as building construction on land which is not authorized for construction.
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, recently a builder from Delhi, India built a residential building of 15 floors in a prohibited area and sold the flats to clients for a very high price.
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, after a short period of time government authorities took action against
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 illegal infrastructure and innocent owners were not only fooled but
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 wasted their money as they were not aware of the fact that the building was constructed in a restricted area. Due to
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 are becoming very cautious when it comes to buying any kind of
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 as it is showing a continuous upward trend in terms of price. To tackle
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 situation, in
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 modern era, solutions to every problem can be found on Google, so
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 should definitely read reviews about the builder as well as the
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 which they are planning to buy. Apart from
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, getting information from the
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 who are already staying in the same locality can be a very effective way to know more about the advantages and disadvantages. To conclude,
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 there are many
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 frauds taking place due to greedy builders , self-awareness will be the best way to avoid it.
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