You recently stayed with a childhood friend for a few days. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for letting you stay with them. refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you

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Dear Julien, Hope you are doing well, say hello to your parents. I want to thank you for making my stay at your home most memorable and enjoyable. The time I spent with you was amazing, I liked your city very much especially, the food you made was so tasty, I had a lot of fun with you in Snow world which made my moments most memorable and I am missing the evening walks to the park with you and watching tv shows as well. Please allow me the pleasure to invite you to my place. I will take you to the famous museum near my home which may be helpful for your project as well and will go shopping together .

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meet our childhood friends and eat your favourite food in the restaurant. Please let me know whenever you want to visit my place so that I can make arrangements. Feel free to bring your roommate as well so that he can have some exposure to my place and We all can have fun together. Hoping to see you soon. Best regards, Karan.

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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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8 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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