Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of traveling for the traveller?
Travelling always remains a glamorous activity of the masses if it is been done for leisure. People are moving from one place to another for several reasons, which
also
contain attached benefits. The arguments related to these are discussed in the following paragraphs.
On one hand, individuals or families are migrating due to
the economic downturn of the country. Due to
that, the economy of the country is shuffling and giving no place to breathe to people. In addition
, Inflation is going up day by day with no alert or ultimatum and is not being stopped or given any sign to stop. Furthermore
, their income strength is not booming, while
the upward trend of pricing is continuous. For example
, If the income of a person was 50k a year and now it is 55k but the value of commodities rose 2-3 times. Moreover
, due to
these reasons, the quality of life of humankind is highly challenged.
On the other hand
, Stepping into new lands like America, Europe or the Far East provides strong promises to the newcomers. Firstly
, There is a sense of security and a sense of a better future for the upcoming generation. Secondly
, Earning in those countries are quite high which provides a sense of confidence. For instance
, if you were earning 50k in your country but there could be 400-500k in your hometown currency. Thirdly
, the Quality of life in those localities is quite superior to what you have experienced at home , and you feel great being there. Lastly
, There are a number of facilities there which you could think might be a dream at your place.
In conclusion, I can comfortably say that they made a great life-changing decision which would make their future bright and comfortable. Though They might face some problems at the start those will be settled soon.Submitted by ashissarker18 on
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