A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In you letter, Thank him/her for the invitation. Explain why you cannot come Ask him/her about other times to visit

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Dear Wai Yan, Thank you for your kind invitation to

this

coming holiday. I do appreciate your time to think about me and I hope you are doing great these days. I am afraid I cannot make it

this

time as I just joined a new local company a month ago and my google calendar are even full of ‘things to do list. Once I resigned from the previous international multi-culture firm, it just happened that I had to join the new firm without any break after. Alongside the promotion to a senior role, the pay went up to what I had expected since

last

year. By the way, there is a job vacancy in

this

company and I believe it fits your expectations if you are keen to apply. Anyway in the

couple of months, there will be long holidays in my country and I can take leave if I need to as I might be slightly less busy. That’s why I can come over to your country if you still have time to spare with me.

However

, I absolutely understand that your schedule is somehow tight as well.

Then

, do let me know once your date availability is confirmed and I will book the flight right away. I hope we can meet sooner as I have been missing you so much. Take care and stay safe. Your dearest friend, Aung

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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