Today’s schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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argued that academy should teach their enlistment how to survive financially in the world.
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so that teachers can develop open-minded and well-informed individuals. At the same time, it can be argued that schools should impart skills that would be applicable in everyday life. Mathematics, Remove the comma
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, schools are supposed to prepare the youths for their lives following high school. Linking Words
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goal is not fully met, as often Linking Words
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are unable to handle their finances sensibly and Use synonyms
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can often face significant problems. Schools that teach Linking Words
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how to survive financially could change Use synonyms
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significant shift in the ideology of education is unlikely to take place soon, as the education system has been in place for too long to be easily changed. Linking Words
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a change of Add a comma
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scale would be costly, as teachers would have to be trained and a syllabus for Linking Words
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potential subject would have to be created. Linking Words
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Germany, a community subject is available in which politics and finances are discussed. Add the comma(s)
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In conclusion, training school Use synonyms
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in financial matters would be very useful. Adding new content to the syllabus would require a significant amount of money, but the entire community would benefit from Use synonyms
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being better prepared for adult life.Use synonyms
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