Today’s schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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are
inexperienced and helpless after graduation when encountering the real world. It is Change the verb form
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therefore
argued that academy should teach their enlistment how to survive financially in the world.
This
topic is difficult, though. Many educators believe that a school is supposed to teach students
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so that teachers can develop open-minded and well-informed individuals. At the same time, it can be argued that schools should impart skills that would be applicable in everyday life. Mathematics, Remove the comma
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for example
, is supposed to not only communicate actual mathematics skills,
but Remove the comma
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also
teach logic to students
. However
, schools are supposed to prepare the youths for their lives following high school. Currently
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,Currently
this
goal is not fully met, as often students
are unable to handle their finances sensibly and therefore
can often face significant problems. Schools that teach students
how to survive financially could change this
.
This
significant shift in the ideology of education is unlikely to take place soon, as the education system has been in place for too long to be easily changed. Also
a change of Add a comma
,Also
this
scale would be costly, as teachers would have to be trained and a syllabus for this
potential subject would have to be created. However
, in some countries, for
example
Germany, a community subject is available in which politics and finances are discussed. Add the comma(s)
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This
leaves students
from Germany in a better situation to deal with finances in their lives.
In conclusion, training school students
in financial matters would be very useful. Adding new content to the syllabus would require a significant amount of money, but the entire community would benefit from students
being better prepared for adult life.Submitted by dedarforagi on
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