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Some people claim that immigrants should adopt the local culture when immigrating to a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree

#people #immigrants #culture #country
People's
culture
 is always a big
identity
 in society. Cultures are different in each
country
. Moving from one
country
 to another
country
 and following the local tradition is a bit difficult in terms of hiding the own
identity
, facing issues I
food
 activities, and complications for the younger generation's
education
. Adopting the
identity
 of the other
country
 will degrade the native
culture
 of the people. People move to another
country
 to earn money and settle in life but adjusting to their traditions will not be good.
For example
, my cousin moved to Thailand and adopted their
culture
, but he forgot all the traditional activities which he used to follow in India.
In addition
, following the other custom, sometimes requires
to move
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 out of their own religion to follow their tradition.
Secondly
,
food
 habit
adopting
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 is always complicated. There are many traditional still follows the rules and regulations of their ancestors in terms of
food
culture
.
For example
, I found it difficult to get a
food
 menu based on my preference after moving to Dubai. It is very hard for everyone to get used to the other traditional
food
 habits.
Finally
, adults find complications in their
education
. Not all
the
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traditional
and
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culture
 follows the same educational pattern
such
 as dancing and brainstorming activities. Most nations have their own set of preferences and it follows by everyone in the
country
. It will not be
a
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 easy task for the younger generation to adopt the new
culture
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education
 format. To conclude,
culture
 is always an essential factor for everyone and following other nation
culture
 is always complicated for their own
identity
,
food
culture
, and children's
education
.
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