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Nowadays more and more business meetings and business trainings are taking place online. Does the advantage of this development outweigh disadvantage.

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Ever since COVID began, there has been a huge shift in the structure of work, and almost everything is now conducted online ,especially business
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 and training.
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 entailed a huge adjustment among employees but eventually became very advantageous. Online
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 have numerous advantages except for the fact that they can lead to distractions. Some
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 do not require their videos or audio turned on, so employees can be doing different activities
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 of participating in the meeting.
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, since workers are stationed at home, family members, pets and other factors can divert their attention from the task on hand.
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, online conferences benefit most businesses due to the amount of time saved. As long as there is a stable internet connection and a laptop,
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 can be done from almost anywhere and jobs can be done more efficiently. A lot of hours will be saved from commuting, and going back and forth to the office. Online gatherings became very convenient both for bosses and employees. Another advantage is that
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 produces a more work-life balance for labourers.
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 of travelling gruelling hours to work,
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 time can be spent with family and doing extracurricular activities
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 as exercising, baking, and exploring new hobbies. To conclude, there are a lot of advantages in the workforce now that
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 are done online,
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 why it is still prevailing today, even though things have come back to almost normal.
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