In some societies,the number of crimes comitted by teenagers is growing.some people think that regardless of age teenagers who commit majour crimes should receive adult punishment.To what extent do you agree of disagree?

Nowadays,in current societies, it can be seen that the tendency of teenagers to commit different kinds of crime is on

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.Many assert that juvenile

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ought to receive

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as adult

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.I entirely agree with

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idea and I think it can be a lesson for other

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who are committing serious

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. Primarily,committing heinous

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have nothing to do with the age of

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.The number of heinous offences

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as rape or murder has significantly increased

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recent decades since some states protect young

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under the Children protection law.the courts behave them leniently and consider light

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, they are asked to do community services or they are put in rehabilitation for about a year for their misdeed like rubbery.

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action doesn't spread a good massage to

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committing

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and it assures them that they would not be given tough

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they continue their misbehave without paying attention to its consequences.

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,the government better give the

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offenders the same

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as adults.

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,if a child is old enough to commit serious

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he is mature enough to be punished as an adult.according to the conducted research by Oxford University in countries where youth offenders are given the severe punishments as adults irrespective of their age,the crime rate is significantly low compared to those ones in which

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are protected by law.

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is of utmost importance in order to decline the number of

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and prevent teenagers from misbehaviours. To sum up,

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of all ages should be treated the same way irrespective of their age.Because when a child

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a heinous crime intentionally, they are aware bout what they are doing so they must be given retribution based on

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it can be a good lesson for their peer and there would be a decrease in the number of

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