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Writing Samples
Band 6.5

A Museum Near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary / unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary / unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary / unpaid work. In your letter - explain why you want to do voluntary / unpaid work at the museum - describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful - give details of when you would be available for work

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Dear sir or madam, I show an advertisement in
local
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the local
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 newspaper about
part-time
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a part-time
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 volunteer
position
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for
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tour
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a tour
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 guide at your museum. so,I would like to apply for that
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. I am interested in
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position
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 to complete my studies because
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 am studying art and to complete my studies,
i
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 have to do 3 months of part-time internship at a museum. I find myself
as
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a perfect fit for
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position
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 because
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 have all the required qualities
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 as good speaker, time punctual and good learner.
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,
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 want to expand my knowledge in my area of studies and working at your museum is the perfect start for me. I am available to work from Monday to Friday after 4 pm to 10 pm as
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 am
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 doing music classes in
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the morning
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 till 3 pm. I am really looking forward to
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 your team .so, I would love to hear from you.
Your
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 faithfully
Avakash
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Aakash

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Enthusiastic
  • Volunteer
  • Part-time
  • Unpaid work
  • Museum director
  • Skills and qualities
  • Customer service
  • Organization
  • Team player
  • Flexible
  • Reliable
  • Positive attitude
  • Availability
  • Professional goals
  • Community contribution
  • References
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