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You will have to undergo a minor surgical procedure and you will not be able to do your job in full. Write to your manager – Explain about the operation. – Say what part of the job you will not be able to do. – Suggest a solution to this situation.

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Dear Sir, My name is Hitesh Dawar, from the IT department. I would like to bring to your attention that I met with an accident, and after the initial inspection, the doctor advised me to have a
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 on my right arm My doctor has suggested to undergo minor surgery and a
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 on the arm, which is scheduled to be done on Friday, 8 December
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 2023. As it is a minor injury,
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it will take only a few hours, and I can rejoin the office by Monday. Unfortunately, because of
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 surgery and
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, I would not be able to work with my right hand.
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 would be there for thirty days. Until that, I would not be able to work on the keyboard with my right hand.
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, I understand that the
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 should meet the deadline, so I request that you provide me with an intern for a few days, as he can write the code on my behalf under my guidance. We can do pair programming, which will allow a trainee to get exposure to work on a live
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while
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 our
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 is not affected. I assure you about the quality of the code and the timely completion of the
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. I hope to have your kind support in
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 regard. Yours Sincerely, Hitesh Dawar

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Ensure each paragraph contains a single clear idea and that the paragraphs form a cohesive whole.
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Use clear and accurate transitional phrases to guide the reader smoothly from one point to the next.
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Maintain formality throughout the entire letter; avoid using conversational language in formal correspondence.
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Check for any ambiguity or unclear references in your letter, making sure all information is accurate and succinct.
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