You have recently visited a local school in your community. It needs people who can help renovate the building and also do other jobs. Write a letter to the principal of the school and say: - how would you be able to help? - When and why would you do it? - Who will help you to do it?

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to offer you help to renovate the
school
building. I got to know about
this
during my
last
visit to the
school
for some community service. My name is Tim Herry, and I am
a
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architect by profession. Preparing
building
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plan
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is my area of expertise, which I am sure can be useful in renovating the building.
Moreover
, the
school
structure is very old now, and it requires strength testing of key support pillars.
Although
it is not my forte, my younger brother can help in
this
regard. As I have taken a 2 months sabbatical from my work, I would be available for
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work all 7 days a week.
Also
, I would be more than happy to offer my services free of cost because I was
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student in
this
school
fifteen years back, and whatever I am today, the credit goes to
this
school
only. My younger brother and I work together as we both have expertise in
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field
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. He is a civil engineer and can be of great help in
school's
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renovation project. Whenever you require any help, both of us will visit the
school
as we live nearby. I hope you will find our help useful and please
dont
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don't
hesitate to get in touch anytime to discuss it in detail. Yours faithfully, Tim Herry
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