You are going to travel to London for about one week and spend two days visiting the London Library. You are studying for a project and want to do some background studies. Write a letter to the head of the library. In your letter explain what your project is about? say what studies you want to do at the library? say what facilities you need to use

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Dear Sir, I hope you are doing fine during

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hard pandemic time.I am writing

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letter to draw your attention to my recent one-week visit to London for a project where I would love to come to the library for a couple of days for some background studies regarding the project.

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, my thesis is based on the discovery and science of the railway where English people played a huge role in its development.

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, I would love to look into the detail of the making of the engines and their theory to run on fuels.

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, I know the depth knowledge is only available there in the library,

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it would be worth spending some time over there to collect data.

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, I would require computers and charts where all data are stored.

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, the help of your history teacher for gathering information. I hope to hear soon from you for the confirmation of my tour to the library. Your's sincerely Tushar Patel.

56tusharMon Aug 01 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

164 words

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