Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think education will not work. Discuss both of them
In recent years, regarding the serious problem that the excessive intake of
junk
food
does not lead to the health
of people
, some maintain that it is due to not-efficient knowledge about such
food
while others believe it is not because of educational problems. This
essay will dispute both opinions and present my own opinion.
First
, focusing on the opinion that it is due to insufficient education on food
that people
cannot keep their health
, in most cases, the vast majority of consumers are not knowledgeable about the negative aspects of junk
food
. That is
why public institutions have to enlighten such
negative points to the mass. For example
, they are able to deepen their understanding of negative influences which are caused by eating pizza or humbergar on their wholesome body. In Japan, the government has got success in enlightening the movement by demonstrating its risk on the remains.
On the other hand
, the contention that their knowledge about food
is relevant to their health
is because of the in-nutrient food
itself. That is
to say, eating food
such
as fried potatoes and onion rings entails degeneration of the wholesome body. It does not matter whether insight of nationalities is efficient or not in terms of nutrition.
In conclusion, there are two opinions about the negative influence triggered by the enormous amount of junk
food
on their health
: The former thinks people
and government have to realize such
impact and tell them drawbacks whilst the latter reckons that such
the negative aspect is because of original nutrition of food
. In my opinion, it is true that what people
do not know much about food
is one of the reasons for their malicious health
. However
, it is also
commonplace that junk
food
has a negative influence on their health
. For these reasons, I am in favour of the former.Submitted by manosuke46 on
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