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Band 7.5

Your local council has advertised for volunteers to teach on a basic English programme for refugees. You would like to do some work for this programme in your free time. Write a letter to the programme coordinator. In your letter • explain why you would like to do unpaid work on this programme • describe why you are a suitable candidate • say when you are available to teach.

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Hello Sir/Madam, I am reaching out to you regarding your advertisement posted in the local newspaper "The Hindu". I was looking for volunteering opportunities within our city where I could utilize my skills for the benefit of society. In past, I have been a beneficiary of social programs organized by various non-profit organizations and governments, so with
this
 opportunity, I want to give back to society. I completed graduation in Business Administration from Noida University and have been working as a soft skill trainer for more than 5 years with various professional organizations
such
 as Cognizant, Infosys and TCS. I would like to utilize my skills to teach the basics of business communication to students which can be useful for them in their future job search. I work on weekdays with my clients.
However
, I would be available throughout the year on weekends to take sessions between 7 a.m. to 5 p.m. I would request you to consider my application and I am looking forward to working with you. Yours faithfully, Sandeep
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task achievement
Try to give more specific reasons for why teaching English to refugees is meaningful to you personally. For example, you might mention any specific skills or cultural insights you can bring to the program.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a single idea and is clearly focused. Combining too many ideas in a single paragraph can make the letter harder to follow.
coherence cohesion
You provided a clear and appropriate closing statement.
task achievement
The tone of your letter is formal and appropriate for the context.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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