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People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

#people #children #ages #outweigh
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 recent years , most
couples
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 decide on the appropriate time for them to procreate. While people are advocating for having a
child
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 at an older
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, in
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, essay the benefits and demerits will be discussed. Presently in
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 metropolitan century ,most
couples
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 tend to build themselves well before procreating and there can be two reasons behind it.
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,
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 want to focus and maintain a good professional paying job in other to have financial stability and provide a better and happy living for their
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 includes proper education , training and good healthcare as the case may be.
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 in the US
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recent research carried out on
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IT
couples
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 between the
age
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 of 35-40 years shows that procreating at
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 point gives them the privilege to share their childhood memories with their
child
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 while growing up.
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, some
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 find it quite interesting raising kids at a younger
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 because of some underlying health conditions which can affect their reproductive system or organs .
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 , having a
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 at a younger
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 will give them the opportunity to interact and play with them because at some point in time they might not have much strength to do so. Again, most kids might end up not living with them at an older
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 . In summary, providing a good and healthy life for your
child
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 is paramount.
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,
couples
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 should be able to have
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better and more stable finance for their
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 ,
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 will
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 prevent
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the loss
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 of hurdles that might arise in the future.
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