You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar. In your letter: Ask for detailed information regarding the program contents. Cost of the program and any discounts for company-sponsored professionals. Provision of accommodation during the program.

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Dear Mr Jackson, I am writing to inquire about the upcoming Javacon seminar that will be taking place in New York City

month. I have received an invitation through the mail, and I am thinking of signing up. Due to my company, Pisk Inc., possibly subsidizing my participation, I would like to know more about the details beforehand as I need

this

information for my proposal.

First

, I would like to inquire about the schedule and speakers of the seminar, and if it is already decided, would you

also

include the topics each speaker plans to present?

Moreover

, I would like to ask about the registration fee and its inclusions, and if there is a difference in fees if it is sponsored by a company or any discount I can possibly avail.

Lastly

, I would like to know the arrangement of the accommodation. Would it be provided by Javacon? If so, would you mind sharing the details of the place and location?

Otherwise

, could you give some recommendations on where the participants should stay? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you in advance. Yours sincerely, Raine Bats

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