Celebrities are admired, idolized and respected, famous
, are
an inseparable part of our society, and have the most influence on other
due to their popularity. Some might think that stars nowadays are only renowned for their glamour and money rather than their performances, and
has a bad influence on young
. I disagree with
opinion, and the reasons will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.
of all, most famous
are popular for their outstanding talents and accomplishments, since today’s young experts are selective and hypercritical, they are not easily impressed by extravagant and luxurious lifestyles. Today’s juveniles judge stars by their actions, talents, and achievements, so mostly extremely talented or interesting ones could become respected, well-known
.
, celebrities predominantly have a positive influence on society, they teach children hard-working, follow their dreams and not to give up easily.
, famous English footballer David Beckham worked hard at a young age to achieve success, as he had to practice doing penalty kicks for around 1000 kicks per day consistently.
, in some cases, money and glamour are just additional factors, which contribute to the initial popularization of someone, because not all talented and eminent
could get famous and share their experiences and talents with the world. The reasons for
may be the harsh media industry or other factors rooted in the
themselves. Today’s stars have at least one thing that they are good at, whether it is singing or acting, it
might be the hidden meanings of their performances, and the emotions that are given to the crowd.
, the BTS, a famous K-Pop boys band, supported the fans with music,
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which teach the fans to love and stand up for themselves, and gave them love and comfort they were deprived of.
, there are thousands of spoiled rich kids, who try to become popular by acting outrageous and scandalous, wasting money on nothing useful but ridiculous and harming, showing off their luxurious and extravagant lives. These
, indeed, affect children negatively and perhaps, destroy young minds, making them mercantile and materialistic.
In a nutshell, popular
might have both positive and negative impacts on society,
, it is important to be able to choose the right ones as role models.