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some beleive that people should get a job right after school. other says they should attend university. discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays , getting a good
job
 is very difficult for anybody so some communities believe that people should get employment after the
job
 because it is very difficult for
everyone
 to get a wonderful business after graduation.
However
, others believe that students should attend college. In
this
 essay ,I would explain both views and give my opinion in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Firstly
 , the main is education should be very important to
everyone
 to find jobs and create their own businesses. ,
Also
 some people suggest that all should start doing the
work
 after school ,in my opinion , it should be not beneficial for
everyone
 because their
age
 can be 17 or less than 18 so in many countries the maximum
age
 is 18 for doing the
job
.
Moreover
 , many of them are just complete their higher education so they might not have any knowledge about production
also
 their thinking ability is not working properly because of their
age
 .
On the other hand
 , in my view the maximum
age
 to start working is 23 or 24 because at
this
 life maximum pupils finished their graduation in their respective field so they all have proper knowledge about stream and
work
also
 they have little experience of
work
 .
for instance
, many students
work
 as
part-time
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 worker in their college time so they know about all things in details so it might be beneficial for the company as well as that employee.
In addition
 , there are several benefits to starting
work
 after education
such
 as , thinking ability and absorbing the
pressure
 of
work
 .
For example
 , in many fields workers have much
pressure
 about their targets , salaries , and family
pressure
 so at
this
 ,
age
 all
pressure
 people can be handled properly . In conclusion , after college should be the best time for
everyone
 to start their
job
 because not only they handle pressures and all things but
also
 it will be helped them to get better salary packages and sometimes it will be
also
 beneficial for the company's development .
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