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In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one's own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development?

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 the way which money was spent on various types of entertainment activities in the USA when compared to Europe and Asia in 1995 and 2000 is depicted in the given chart. Overall, it is clear that the money which Americans spent on entertainment was far higher than the two
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years. As per the chart, publishing was the area where money was spent significantly in
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 in both the years. In 2000, out of the total $257
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, the expenditure of Americans on publications was nearly $120
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 more than in 1995, when they spent a gross $184
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 mark. Music, video and cinema were the areas where the spending was done comparatively less in these three
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Genealogy
  • Heritage
  • Ancestry
  • Lineage
  • Descendants
  • Forebears
  • Pedigree
  • Dynasty
  • Progenitors
  • Ethnicity
  • Genetic predisposition
  • Familial ties
  • Archival records
  • Hereditary
  • Kinship
  • Self-identity
  • Patriarchy/Matriarchy
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