The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest threat faced by humanity at the present time . Do you agree?
Nowadays, overpopulation has been altered to be a significant danger for mankind considering various challenges resulting from it for modern societies. Yet, there remains a contentious debate as to whether
this
phenomenon can be a detrimental scenario for Linking Words
people
in the near future or not. I strongly agree with Use synonyms
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topic and will support my perspective with more details and practical examples.
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Firstly
, the primary difficulty is the lack of job opportunities for the population. Linking Words
In addition
, it is an indisputable fact that more Linking Words
people
should be supported with appropriate occupations, Use synonyms
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this
can be a challenging case for the governments to fulfil Linking Words
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need; meanwhile, a higher rate of unemployment can lead to a higher level of crime in society Linking Words
as well as
an unsafe living condition. Linking Words
For instance
, not having a suitable career can provoke and motivate individuals to gain additional Linking Words
incomes
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illegal ways resulting in various disturbances in a homogeneous society. Change preposition
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Consequently
, unsatisfactory working conditions can be addressed as the main negative outcome of overpopulation that can lead to a considerable increase in the crime rate, particularly in less affluent parts of the Linking Words
nations
.
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Further
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this
issue needs more deforestation for Linking Words
people
's settlement and accommodation. Regarding the fact that more lands are needed to build living shelters for dwellers, more forests and jungles must be undermined to satisfy Use synonyms
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requirement, which is a potent factor Linking Words
for
the extinction of different living species. One particularly salient example is related to the animal species that are losing their natural habitats and are relegated Change preposition
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however
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this
phenomenon has a destructive impact on them with a high probability of their extinction. Linking Words
Thus
, the need for more living spaces has a high capability of ruining the environment for animals and different living species, which can disrupt the normal nutrition chain in nature for both humankind and animals.
As a way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm that the rising rate of the population all over the world can result in insurmountable causes for both mankind and animals. Linking Words
Also
, it is highly recommended to provide cognitive processes for Linking Words
people
to better clarify the dangers of Use synonyms
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