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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negativedevelopment? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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In today’s world,
technology
 plays a crucial role in every facet of a person’s life. Artificial intelligence machines have altered how
people
 interact with one another. The
relationships
people
 make have been impacted by how convenient it is to communicate and how easy it is to take care of family and friends in daily life as well as with colleagues in the workplace. The essay will analyze these effects before presenting the final conclusion.
Firstly
, the advent of
technology
 helps
people
 connect with those around them
easily
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 and faster, despite physical distance.
For example
, my brother, Felix, who had studied abroad in Korea for 5 years, still kept in contact with me and my parents by texting and video calling through Facebook and Messenger at the tip of his finger.
This
 helped us constantly update
about
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Felix’s health and amazing things about his life so that my mother and father could feel secure. It can be seen that
people
 can maintain their
relationships
 by contacting others more often using smart devices connected to wifi.
Thus
,
technological
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 invention provides an easy way for humans to interact with each other in
the
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relationships
.
Furthermore
, the development of all kinds of
technology
 creates a new and convenient way for
people
 to take care of their loved ones.
For instance
, banking apps like BIDV smart banking and delivery apps like Baemin in Vietnam help
people
 send presents to family, friends, and colleagues on special occasions, in case they cannot meet each other directly. It is clear that
people
 now are able to effortlessly show their love in important
relationships
 due to the support of technological apps.
Therefore
, the relations have been tightly attached on account of timely care in spite of
distance
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. After looking at both these effects, I strongly believe that
technology
 has brought a positive change in how
people
 make and keep their
relationships
 in good condition.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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