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in the future no body will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

#future #body #newspapers #books
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It is debated that the popularity of
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 will overthrow the usage of traditional content and magazines .I completely disagree with the statement .
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 ,the necessity of having traditional
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 as some people cannot handle new technology. The convenience of
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books
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 by far surpasses the older ways of reading .Carrying many bookish items in a single compact device makes it necessary in today's fast-paced world.Apart from being less expensive,they are quick to download and share with friends .The ease of access from where in the world makes
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 indispensable .
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 as ,friends can buy
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books
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 on diverse topics and share them with each other making it easy to read many materials at a lesser price.
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 ,many people especially the older generation ,find it extremely difficult to handle new technology .
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,they prefer to continue reading traditional manuscripts and magazines .
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 kind of reading gives all the information they want and is
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 a good way for them to pass their time as most of them are retired .In fact ,most of them proudly like to proudly display the collection of intellectual materials that they have gathered over time .Physical
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 do not have the threat of getting deleted due to any technical error .
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 ,many old people can be sitting in parks and other recreational places reading
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 reading
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 and relaxing . Though
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 are quite convenient and can reduce the cumbersome task of carrying heavy
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,it is necessary to continue with the traditional
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 for the benefit of the older generation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital media
  • accessible
  • advancements
  • user-friendly
  • environmental impact
  • reducing paper consumption
  • digital reading devices
  • economic implications
  • monetization models
  • demographics
  • collectibility
  • ease of annotation
  • reduced screen time
  • negative impacts
  • literacy
  • reading habits
  • promoting access
  • cultural significance
  • historical significance
  • transition
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