Some people believe that governments are spending more money on wild life. This money should be used for other works. Do you agree or disagree?

Many countries are struggling with environmental issues which are needed to be resolved. There are those who believe that authorities should allocate

money

to other works rather than

wildlife

which more

money

is used for that. I am of the opinion that spending more

money

on promoting awareness and public services would be a more effective usage.

Firstly

, environmental issues are interrelated and so solving issues related to urban life in the country automatically presents a more livable habitat for

wildlife

.

That is

to say, citizens destroy the natural habitats near the city for various purposes which poses a threat to

wildlife

.

For instance

, Turkey has lost a quarter of the green land because of urban sprawl in the

last

decade and it

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in

loss

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the loss

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of biodiversity.

As a result

, rather than devoting more

money

to

wildlife

, other environmental problems should be resolved immediately by promoting awareness of the public.

Secondly

, education which is one of the public services necessitates a sufficient budget to be devoted. It is more important than the

wildlife

as

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society becomes conscious,

wildlife

faces less hazardous occasions.

For instance

, hunting is permitted based on some regulations for the sake of the

wildlife

. People who do not know

such

regulations or do not care about them break the laws and it leads to over-hunting. Education presents a social environment

that is

vital for environmental awareness.

Thus

, states should put more effort to resolve underlying reasons

instead

of the apparent problem. In conclusion, there is a dilemma related to the budget which is allocated to

wildlife

more than the other works. I am a supporter that

money

should be spent on the other works which are mentioned in

this

essay respectively.