Some people think that the best way to gather information is through newspapers while others believe in other better ways. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
This
trend has led to a great debate among many people
. There are some good points
from gather information through newspapers but at the same time
there are some demerits that could be seen in gathering information through newspapers. I think that the negative Add a comma
,time
points
of this
trend outnumber the positive points
.
To begin
with, some people
think that the best way to gather information is through newspapers and this
seems to have some great advantages. For example
, All news that happened during the day is in the newspaper
at night. Another advantage that could be helpful not only for rich people
but also
for poor people
is that the newspaper
is so cheap and anyone can buy it because it costs approximately half
dollar to 1 dollar. Change the article
half a
a half
Moreover
, they argue that this
issue
could lead to many positive points
. Hence
, they are happy to say that this
trend is better for them. As a result
, according to my statement
it is clear that they can get many advantages through Add a comma
,statement
this
issue
.
On the other hand
, other people
believe that this
issue
has some negative points
. As an example, this
issue
may affect people
like infectious disease spread in a country and no one knows about this
disease and you should wait until the night to go and buy a newspaper
and maybe the disease has been spread. Another negative point, If someone wants to read a newspaper
he should go to a store and this
takes a lot of time. In other words
, It may cause many problems such
as someone who is blind cannot read. Thus
, they see that this
issue
is harmful to them. As an effect, they believe that avoiding this
issue
will be the best choice.
to conclude, based on what has been discussed above there are both desired and undesired effects stemming from this
issue
, and it seems to me that in this
issue
the negative points
outnumber the positive points
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