in some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studied.advantages disadvantages

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technologies, machinery and awareness it has become really difficult for a senior secondary student to decide

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career in various fields. In some countries, teenagers are motivated to work or travel before starting university studies. In

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both benefits and drawbacks will be discussed before my opinion is reached.

For the

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advantages, the

first

benefit of working before the starting of undergraduate courses is to develop

interest

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in any particular course or stream, as it allows the young people to explore new skills and techniques.

For example

, I can work as a foreman and gain knowledge about the

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of Civil Engineering before commencing my coursework.

Moreover

, it will

also

help them in their resume where they can show

this

as an internship or job experience. Even though the students will gain a clear vision for their future but it

also

has some drawbacks.

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can put them behind their classmates in the freshmen

year

of university. To illustrate, when I will join the college as a rookie my friends have already completed their

first

year

.

Furthermore

, if someone travels for a

year

then

it will show as a gap

year

on their resume.

Therefore

, it can lead to

further

questions. In conclusion,

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essay presented both pros and cons of the young people working or travelling before ending college, I think that its benefit including , a clear vision of the future and more opportunities in job outweighs its demerits