Most of the world’s poor live in countries where tourism is a growing industry. The issue is that tourism does not benefit the poorest. What is the cause of this? What can be done about this?

Tourism

is commonly regarded by developing nations as a pathway to grow the economy, thanks to its tendency to bring in foreign visitors to drive up local spending. Despite the apparent boons, critics argue that the benefits of facilitating

this

industry

are tangential for the grassroots.

This

essays

Change the determiner

essay

show examples

aims to investigate the underlying reasons

of

Change preposition

for

show examples

this

claim and argue that government-funded

education

would enable the underprivileged to enjoy the fruit of

this

lucrative

industry

. While facilitating economic growth, the most common criticism of

tourism

is that it seldom provides for the lower class. Providing hospitality for visitors from abroad requires a certain level of

education

, yet

this

is a scarce commodity in backward countries where people are more concerned with securing their

next

meal than proper schooling.

As a result

, the impoverished are unable to take up

better paying

Add a hyphen

better-paying

show examples

jobs related

tourism

Change preposition

to tourism

show examples

such

as tour guides and curators, leaving them poor. Perhaps the best illustration

to

Change preposition

of

show examples

this

phenomenon is the impoverished population residing in rural China. Despite having a rich cultural heritage, the local government is unable to capitalize

it

Change preposition

on it

show examples

as a selling point for local

tourism

due to the language barrier, resulting in inter-generational poverty that has haunted the area for decades. To tackle

this

problem, the administration plays a pivotal role in ensuring the fruits of developing the

tourism

industry

be evenly distributed. One way of doing so is to devote a designated percentage of the proceeds generated from

tourism

to bankroll schools in impoverished regions. When provided with more

education

opportunities, those below the poverty line can eventually be self-sufficient. In fact, it is a common practice for governments around the

Correct your spelling

world

show examples

would

Correct your spelling

world

show examples

to

Change the verb form

apply

show examples

levy

corporate

Add an article

a corporate

the corporate

show examples

tax for subsidizing public welfare, with

education

being prioritized. Through

this

act of redistribution, it is possible for the local have-nots to eventually stand on their own. All in all, the development of the

tourism

industry

should not be left

on

Change preposition

to

show examples

its own devices due to the uneven distribution of rewards. It is

Add the comma(s)

, therefore,

show examples

therefore

necessary for the government to balance the interests

between

Change preposition

of

show examples

respective parties to ensure an equitable outcome.