Fast food is now universally available in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are you opinions on this?

Fast

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restaurant

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have been widespread all over the world. It is purported that

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development brought numerous benefits for everyone, while some argue that excessive consumption of

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junk

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is a negative indication for individuals and

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society as a whole. I personally do believe that they have bad

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on people. On the one hand,

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the appearance of these

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looks appetising and delicious, they are detrimental to health. To illustrate, there are approximately 50% of

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adults worldwide are overweight or obese. Because of the hectic schedules and city pace of life, citizens pursue productivity and effectiveness in order to make a living.

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, it is scientifically proven that most of these fast foods

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tremendous

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amount of sugar, fat carbohydrates and calories.

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it is fattening people up, most importantly they may run the risk of having

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disease

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like diabetes, blood tension, heart disease, etc.

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, the production of these calorific foods is causing environmental damage.

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of all, meat is a common fast

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ingredient,

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as beef in hamburgers,

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chicken in KFC.

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, a

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myriad

of animals are raised and

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slaughtered to satisfy the growing demand for meat. Yet livestock

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one of the major

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factor

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of

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greenhouse gas emissions globally.

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, the global

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temperature

tempurature

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temperature

will be risen, since these gases are trapping the heat in the atmosphere. To sum up, people may have

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view

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on whether fast foods lead to any problems, but it

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that they will be deleterious to the whole society. In light of the circumstances, my belief is that avoiding

to eat

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eating

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these unhealthy

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this unhealthy food

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food

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would be a better life.