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Fast food is now universally available in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are you opinions on this?

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Fast
food
 restaurant
chain
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chains
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 have been widespread all over the world. It is purported that
this
 development brought numerous benefits for everyone, while some argue that excessive consumption of
these
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this
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 junk
food
 is a negative indication for individuals and
the
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society as a whole. I personally do believe that they have bad
influences
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influence
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 on people. On the one hand,
although
 the appearance of these
food
 looks appetising and delicious, they are detrimental to health. To illustrate, there are approximately 50% of
the
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adults worldwide are overweight or obese. Because of the hectic schedules and city pace of life, citizens pursue productivity and effectiveness in order to make a living.
However
, it is scientifically proven that most of these fast foods
contains
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tremendous
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 amount of sugar, fat carbohydrates and calories.
Hence
 it is fattening people up, most importantly they may run the risk of having
chronic
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disease
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diseases
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 like diabetes, blood tension, heart disease, etc.
On the other hand
, the production of these calorific foods is causing environmental damage.
First
 of all, meat is a common fast
food
 ingredient,
such
 as beef in hamburgers,
roasted
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and roasted
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 chicken in KFC.
That is
, a
myraid
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myriad
 of animals are raised and
then
 slaughtered to satisfy the growing demand for meat. Yet livestock
are
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 one of the major
contribution
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factor
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factors
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of
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 greenhouse gas emissions globally.
As a result
, the global
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temperature
tempurature
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temperature
 will be risen, since these gases are trapping the heat in the atmosphere. To sum up, people may have
divergent
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view
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views
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 on whether fast foods lead to any problems, but it
evident
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 that they will be deleterious to the whole society. In light of the circumstances, my belief is that avoiding
to eat
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eating
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these unhealthy
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this unhealthy food
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food
 would be a better life.
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