You are going for a one week vacation and your friend agreed to stay at your place while you are away. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter you should: thank him/her and tell the dates of your holiday explain how he/she enters the house describe what you expect him/her to do

Dear Divyesh, I am writing
this
letter to thank you for having my back, as I am going out on a holiday trip planned by my office in order to appreciate the dedication of my work. To commence with, as you know I m going
next
month on the 7th which is Saturday and my trip ends on the 15th . I would like to appreciate your esteem and for taking care of my house in the meantime.
Additionally
, I will give you basic information regarding the house.
Firstly
, you can find the keys to the house,
next
door his name is Dhruv . After entering the front yard , the key for the main door is kept in my garage which is open and on left.
In addition
, to access the bedroom you need a passcode which is 3572. Apart from it, it is a request from me to feed the fish every evening, and the food is in the
first
drawer and to water the plants in the morning for that you just have to on the tap
next
to the garage. Thank you in anticipation as it means a lot to
next
me. Yours lovingly, Vandana Patel.
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