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Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives. In what ways can society benefit from the contribution that older people can make?

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On average in
this
 modern era,
people
's
life
 spans
range
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 from around 65 to 75 years old. And productive age will be around 30 until 50 years old. Above that age, you could say that
people
 will already be too old to be productive and be able to
work
 properly. Situations like not being able to
work
makes
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 old
people
 tend to enjoy their remaining time and spend it with their
families
. They'll become lazier to
work
 and exercise their brains more. In some research
also
 it is already proven that using less brain activity makes Alzheimer's catch up quickly. Having a balanced
life
 and healthy habits are
also
 proven to be able to mitigate the risk of getting
Alzheimer
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Alzheimer's
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. But for old
people
 exercising their brain will be a challenge due to nothing to
work
 on.
Families
 and relatives are the crucial parts of old age
people
 to have more activities. Having them move and getting more activities around
families
 are the best way to make their lives more active. That will
also
 be reflected in their daily lives. The consumption of their diets
also
 becomes more challenging from time to time and commonly being provided by their relatives. In conclusion, healthy
life
 and being more active
people
 are the responsibilities of their
families
. The respect and care that's being given to them affect their health and
life
 spans. It was already proven scientifically by
people
 in japan that have longer
life
 spans because their respect, affections and activities
that is
 given by their
families
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