some children can learn more efficienty by watching t.v. therefore, children should watch t.v regularly both in school and at home . do you agree or not ?

Television

, which has become the need of the hour, might harm youth's mind and eyesight;

nevertheless

, it is believed by a few masses that young

one

gain more skills from watching

television

and

that is

the reason they should watch it not only in the home but at the school

also

. I,

however

, disagree with the idea and will explain

reasons

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for it in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, “harm child eyesights” is perhaps the prominent reason for it, To put it simply,

television

screens are sensitive

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if little

one

face these screens more than a few hours, it will badly effect on their eyes and they might be lost their eye sometimes.

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, "the

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of India" newspaper reveals that more than half

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juvenile

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juveniles

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who

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constantly

constanly

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constantly

watch tv

are suffer

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from

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the eyesights

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eyesights

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issue

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.

As a result

, offspring should set

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while watching tv.

Moreover

,

television

thesedays

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these days

,

broadcasting

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more drama programs

instead

of educational content which mislead innocent young

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in the wrong direction.

Nevertheless

, another reason worth mentioning here is, "distracting them during the study" to elaborate it, since

television

channels reliance on advertising,

this

marketing will disturb children while learning because

this

bombating

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bombing

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in every minute on screen. Japan could be an ideal example here, their school eliminated

television

last

year due to it creates a focus issue in juvenile education.

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, in order to focus on

academy

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, youths should not watch them regularly.

Besides

this

,

television

cannot replace books in

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of knowledge because books are in

more

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older and bridge more knowledge than tv To conclude,

although

television

could be helpful sometimes in gaining knowledge, it is detrimental for little

one

eye and it disturbs learners by bombarding

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