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Your professor has assigned the class a final project. However, each student is free to choose who they will work with. If you had to work on this kind of project, would you rather: Work alone Work with classmates Work with a tutor

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People often say that two heads are better than one, but in my experience, I am always more productive if I
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 alone than with classmates or a tutor. There are two reasons for
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, which I will discuss in the following paragraphs. For one, I prefer working alone on projects because
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 allows me to
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 at my own pace. When working with a team or a mentor, I must adjust to other people’s schedules. There are meetings to plan and tasks to delegate, which takes a lot of time. But, when I
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 by myself, I can do the
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 when I am motivated and inspired to do it. I can draw from personal experience to highlight
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 perspective. Once I had a
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 in biology to do with a group of four people. We were all very busy students, with part-time jobs and extra-curricular activities. It was almost impossible to schedule a time for all of us to meet. Because of
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, we got started too late. Each of our parts of the
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 was disconnected and thrown together, and ultimately our overall score was low because we didn’t have time to
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 on the
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. If I had just done the whole
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 myself, I know I would have received a better grade. For
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 reason, working alone is better for me because I can
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 according to my own timetable. The
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 reason I prefer to
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 by myself on projects is that everyone creates a different level of quality in their
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 for the group. Sometimes when working with classmates, a few of them are lazier than I am. I always want to do the best job I can, so it is better for me to
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 alone.
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 once, and two of the students in the group didn’t do their share of the
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. Ultimately, I had to do my part and their parts as well. It would have been better and easier for me to just do all the
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 myself than to be frustrated and wait until the
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 minute for my team to let me down. Because I always give 100
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, and not everyone else does, it is just better for me to
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 by myself. In conclusion, if I were working on a
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 alone. Working by myself allows me to go at my own pace, and it
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 without having to depend on others for my grade.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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