Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
Sugar
is an integral part of our lives and in our daily food such
as bread, candies, cakes
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and cakes
However
, the government should raise the prices of sugary products
in order to prevent customers from using too much sugar
. As far as I concerned, I am totally disagree
with the view and Change the verb form
totally disagree
a
increasing cost is not appropriate.
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To begin
with, levying high price
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prices
in
sugary Change preposition
on
products
would cause the
hunger for the poor. In some cases, the poverty needs to buy sweet foods like juice, milk and usually contain Correct article usage
apply
sugar
in it in order to maintain a full of nutrition eating and
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apply
sugar
is also
shown to store energy for the body and put sweet foods in people
, you feel indeed improve your mood and comfortable. For example
, office workers run out of energy after a day
work, they need to eat Change noun form
day's
snack
or candies that contain Fix the agreement mistake
snacks
sugar
to retrieve strength.
The second
reason why this
issue is disapproved upon
is that we could see that there are plenty of Change preposition
apply
people
still
buy sugary Correct pronoun usage
who still
products
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in spite
inspite
of high prices. Sweet-Correct your spelling
in spite
addictors
just too Correct your spelling
addiction
much
passionate Correct quantifier usage
apply
to
sugary food so they will spend their money getting what they want by all means. Change preposition
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For instance
, we can see that there is no help when wine and cigarette
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people
still buy at
a huge amount. Change preposition
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Therefore
, it will make a lot of profit for the seller who want
to take advantage of Change the verb form
wants
high
price but low value. The Correct article usage
a high
last
issue worth mentioning in
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is
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fact that the extra cost Correct your spelling
the
in
sugary Change preposition
of
products
will not as
effective as Add a missing verb
be as
the
raising awareness in public. SinceCorrect article usage
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,
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can
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determined
determine
determind
the Correct your spelling
determine
quantity
of sweet foods Change the quantifier
number
depend
on individual demand to have a healthy diet.
In conclusion, I believed that Change the verb form
depends
the
expensive sugary food will not affect Correct article usage
apply
to
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consumption Correct article usage
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in
the eating habit. From that point, Change preposition
of
people
need to have more knowledge to regulate the
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their
sugar
level for
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to
suitable
extent of their body.Correct article usage
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