Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, when people reach a
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level of the
technology development, it`s quite recklessly to think that we are Correct article usage
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only
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the only
one
intelligent race in our universe and even in our galaxy. As for Correct pronoun usage
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me
our civilization is not ready for meeting aliens due to an unqualified level of evolution of the society.
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some scientists want to send a call about our location. I hope above allAdd a comma
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the
intellectual life came in Correct article usage
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piece
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a piece
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that
our planet would do a great leap in Correct pronoun usage
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quality
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and colonize other planets. Fix the infinitive
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However
, as we know people very
greedy and selfish Add a missing verb
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this
contact with another race not from the Earth might turn into slaughter.
On the other hand
, the opinion that the signal should not be sent. I believe, that these researchers guided
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alien`s
spaceships can catch the signal and arrive Change noun form
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our world that without a doubt they would have Change preposition
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colossal
advantage in Add an article
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weapon power unlike us. Correct article usage
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Finally
, humankind would be slaved or just annihilated. It`s like a
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signal, for this
reason, I think we need to get more cooperation between countries and concentrate all energy on the
mutual growth. Correct article usage
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Subsequently
, they can find us without any help.
In conclusion
I would say, I agree with the statement that we don`t need to transmit any signs of our position. Add a comma
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