Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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technology development, it`s quite recklessly to think that we are
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intelligent race in our universe and even in our galaxy. As for
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our civilization is not ready for meeting aliens due to an unqualified level of evolution of the society. On the one
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some scientists want to send a call about our location. I hope above all
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if different forms of
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intellectual life came in
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our planet would do a great leap in
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of the devices. It would open a gate to the mysterious riddles of the foremost space and allow us
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and colonize other planets.
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, as we know people
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greedy and selfish
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contact with another race not from the Earth might turn into slaughter.
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by
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if
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spaceships can catch the signal and arrive
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our world that without a doubt they would have
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advantage in
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weapon power unlike us.
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, humankind would be slaved or just annihilated. It`s like
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Russian roulette to send
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reason, I think we need to get more cooperation between countries and concentrate all energy on
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mutual growth.
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I would say, I agree with the statement that we don`t need to transmit any signs of our position.
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explore their own
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before
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space.
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  • investigate
  • interstellar
  • speculate
  • communication
  • primitive
  • potential
  • collaboration
  • unlock
  • unprecedented
  • advancement
  • caution
  • consequences
  • hostile
  • unknowingly
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